那些年，我在學校寫下的作文#5

作文題目：Space Mission
就讀年級：中二

"Report your location please, Don." a voice came from the speaker.

"The sun appears on my left and the international space station is on the back, about 4000 meters. Report complete," replied Don.

"Don't forget your mission - searching for a new planet for us, a perfect and beautiful one." the voice from the speaker said seriously.

"Have you forgotten me, Newton? You didn't even greet me!" shouted Joe.

"Oh. come on! Don't get mad. How about a nice piece of cheesecake with a cup of hot milk tea for you when you come back?" Newton apologized from the speaker.

"Do not break your promise! Bye!" Joe said.

"Have a nice day, young astronauts, bye," Newton replied and ended the conversation.

After the conversation with Newton, Don and Joe started checking the engines and the control panel until they heard a loud sound from the engine.

"Oh my god, large space garbage has crashed on our spaceship," Don shouted, frightened.

"Newton, Newton, this is spaceship PRC340, we have just been hit by..." Before Joe could call for help, smoke was coming out from the control panel and it started burning. Don and Joe frowned as they had no way to call for help. Also, the engine was damaged and the spaceship couldn't move.

"What should we do? We will run out of oxygen, water and food," asked Joe. However, Don was unable to answer him. After an hour, both of them were tired and hopeless.

Suddenly, a strong light appeared above the damaged spaceship.

“A UFO!" thought Joe. She put on her spacesuit and want to escape. Yet, before she opened the door, an alien got in and spoke loudly.

"Hello my dear friends, I'm R, nike(nice) to meet u(you). I am sorly(sorry) about my pronunciation. Your metal boot(boat) is going to reach our planet. It is a planet that is suitable to live. However, we weal(will) not let you stay there. Look at what you did to your planet Earth - pollution, disease and disasters. Finding a new planet is not your mission. You should protect the Earth and stop polluting it. Go back to Earth and tell your friends that this is urgent. Or else there will never be a planet that can last long. Go now!"

R disappeared after speaking to them. Their spaceship was back to normal.

"Let's go," Don said to his partner.

"To where?" Joe asked.

"To Earth, and begin our new mission!" Don answered cheerfully.

The spaceship started to go back to Earth. Don and Joe were about to start their new mission.

The End

感想
這篇文章對我來說非常之印象深刻。
因為當時是拿到了全班最高分，
也好像是我中學生涯裡唯一一次在英文作文中拿如此高的分數，
亦因此才決定把這篇文章保留下來。
純粹就創意而言，我覺得真的不錯，
但以Grammar和Spelling而言，仍然相當之災難級。
那時做改正幾乎「由頭改到落尾」，超級後悔寫那麼多字✍️✍️✍️。